Glad I found you, this provokes a good feel to me. Nice composition and values. The shading her skin is great, good natural unsaturated colors. I'll become a fan and continue watching your work here. Thank you for sharing your efforts!
Colors and composition are great, very warm towards to right pulling us in and the dark in the top left to keep us pushed towards the warm. His facial expression has a quirky attitude. Creative, rustic, grungy even, textures in his skin and the serene shading of the sky do great things in this piece.
Thank you very much. ^^
I really love the skin tones, something I have issues with. My visual confusion is she feels very separate from her environment. The focal point seems to be her face but my eyes were left wondering what everything around her was intended to be. I got mentally "stuck" pondering what her clothes would be made of with that texture, or if her gun was in movement because she seemed to be still, I lost the focus of your piece because everything else is so out of focus. I really appreciate the care given with details in her lips and nails.
The image was intended to be the character(who is male) Raven holding a gun out toward the forth wall. The gun should not be pointed at the audience, but rather the audience would be watching him point a gun at someone else. I attempted to focus only on his face, and not the background or the foreground but I realize now that I should have picked only the foreground or background to set out of focus rather than both. It would have made for a much less confusing piece, I imagine. Thank you for the critique. =3
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