Children getting butt hurt.
Honestly, every one of us has known an individual who has commited suicide, or tried to.
The fact that you are capable of looking at something like this and laughing is where it counts. If you are honestly so heart broken over someone making a joke about life, then take a look AROUND you. You are at Newgrounds, we don't come here to make funny videos out of nothing, we come here to look at things in life and laugh at it. So seriously, learn to stop being such a child and taking things so personally, because we don't need that here. You wouldn't last one second in General Forums, that's for sure.
So please kids, don't go as far as to bring real life issues into it. No one cares, this is the internet, not your psychiatrist.
It was cute. <3 :]
I actually liked it.
The concept kind of reminded me of Stick vs. Animator or something. But, it was nice to see it in something other than a little stick man.
And the crappy grammar was actually a good thing in my opinion.. made it cuter.
Made me giggle. :]
I'm thinking it was most funny just because the kid is humerous in the way he talks and such.
I like it. :]
I love the original concept. I wish he would do a little more moving around, but it definatly has potential.
Nice work man.
Very nice, simple and clean cut. I liked that about it -- definatly more selections over all would be a nice add on. Then again, no matter how much you put you can always put more.
Also wanted to say I liked the fact that you go out of your way to respond to a majority of your reviews -- shows you are really into what you do. That's good stuff.
Would definatly like to see more coming from you.
well, technically i respond to all my reviews once i see them...in some fashion or another . thanks for noticing ! and thanks for thekind words
A bit much like Frank's Adventure.
Usually your games were all pretty original, the only reason I was a bit harder on this one was because it reminded me way too much of the style for Frank's Adventure. Not exactly the concept, but the style.
Glad I found you, this provokes a good feel to me. Nice composition and values. The shading her skin is great, good natural unsaturated colors. I'll become a fan and continue watching your work here. Thank you for sharing your efforts!
Colors and composition are great, very warm towards to right pulling us in and the dark in the top left to keep us pushed towards the warm. His facial expression has a quirky attitude. Creative, rustic, grungy even, textures in his skin and the serene shading of the sky do great things in this piece.
Thank you very much. ^^
I really love the skin tones, something I have issues with. My visual confusion is she feels very separate from her environment. The focal point seems to be her face but my eyes were left wondering what everything around her was intended to be. I got mentally "stuck" pondering what her clothes would be made of with that texture, or if her gun was in movement because she seemed to be still, I lost the focus of your piece because everything else is so out of focus. I really appreciate the care given with details in her lips and nails.
The image was intended to be the character(who is male) Raven holding a gun out toward the forth wall. The gun should not be pointed at the audience, but rather the audience would be watching him point a gun at someone else. I attempted to focus only on his face, and not the background or the foreground but I realize now that I should have picked only the foreground or background to set out of focus rather than both. It would have made for a much less confusing piece, I imagine. Thank you for the critique. =3
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